October Massacre Great song
You had a great song going on.. Why did you stop at 2:44???
4/5 you should really think about making an extended version. When the lead comes in, it is like the song is about to tell you "and now get ready to what I'm about to do" instead the song finishes soon after, that's too bad....
and now for some critique
- I don't think a sax fits quite well in here maybe try putting another instrument to do the saxophone part. How about a nice electric guitar? Yes, I think that would suit that melody part MUCH better.
-at 00:58 / 01:13 there's something wrong maybe you should check carefully what's happening because there's something "odd" going on between the bass and the melody, there's a little of confusion.
Overall, it was an exquisite song and I enjoyed listening it. Keep up the good work.
